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Post by alfie56 on Jun 11, 2012 15:17:42 GMT
Hi. I am new to horse gossip. I am going to create a story and I want you to help me. I want to write a bit of the story and you have to continue it. And so on. Since most of horse gossip is about horses, I am going to write it about horses. It does include other animals to though.
Valentine And Heartbreaker.
A fabulous horse called Valentine had, had a beautiful foal called Heartbreaker. One day Hearybreaker told Valentine that he wanted to be a champion one day. Valentine told him that he had a very good chance of becoming a champion due to his good looks and pretty movement. Heartbreaker snorted and started to graze in the shade. Valentine went over to the hedge and started to talk to a wolf, who was passing by. The wolf said "Hello. My name is Wolfie. What's your name?"
"Hello. I am called Valentine. You are not going to eat me are you?"
"Oh, hello. Course not! I am a friendly wolf. I am currently running away from Ivlet, a really evil wolf!"
"Hide in my pasture"
"There you are!" Ivlet roared!
"Run!" They all said in unison.
I am going to leave it as a cliff hanger so can the next person to read this continue the story on. And so on. Thank you.
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Post by showponies28 on Jun 11, 2012 16:04:49 GMT
And Valentine and Wolfie were ate by Ilvet. The end  |
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Post by pipandwill on Jun 11, 2012 20:22:12 GMT
^ Arrrr no.
Valentine and Wolfie ran as fast as possible but Valentine was struggling to run away from Ilvet. So Wolfie engaged in a fierce fight with Ilvet so he could save Valentine....
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Post by hollyxx on Jun 11, 2012 20:34:36 GMT
Valentine did not know how to repay her hero, Wolfie, so she planted a large kiss on his soft, fuzzy cheek!  |
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Post by choppytrotty on Jun 12, 2012 16:51:12 GMT
Wolfie fainted, whilst Valentine galloped into the horizon..
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Post by hollyxx on Jun 12, 2012 18:05:15 GMT
But when he awoke he'd forgotten all about Valentine and his heroicness!!  |
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Post by snowflake on Jun 12, 2012 18:42:05 GMT
However a very pretty pony called Fran found Wolfie & told him Valetine & Heartbreaker were waiting in the paddock for him. Frans friends, Stripes & Rory were then very brave & went on the hunt to find Ilvet who had gone to Forks, America to go & fight some vampires.......  |
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Post by choppytrotty on Jun 12, 2012 19:20:18 GMT
Whilst they fought vampires, a ghost came along and struck down Stripes... :/
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Post by snowflake on Jun 12, 2012 19:21:30 GMT
But Fran did mouth to mouth & Stripes survived ;D ;D
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Post by choppytrotty on Jun 12, 2012 19:38:18 GMT
:DD
They then fought heroically through the night, and in the morning they went to the shops to buy ice-creams. They bought...
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Post by pipandwill on Jun 12, 2012 20:08:23 GMT
The whole shop, because it takes alot of energy to fight vampires.
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Post by abcd on Jun 12, 2012 20:12:13 GMT
Once they had eaten all of the food they had brought and were fully loaded on energy, they went back to the vampires but ....
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Post by snowflake on Jun 12, 2012 20:13:23 GMT
The Vampires were GONE! & were heading to Brummy Land! Dun, dun, dunnnn!... |
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Post by pipandwill on Jun 12, 2012 20:15:25 GMT
But fran and stripes knew this, so the ran to Brummy Land where the vampired where trying to eat Liv, but good ol' fran and stripes fought the vampires off.
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Post by snowflake on Jun 12, 2012 20:17:44 GMT
Thistle then cantered up from Gloucestershire & helped finish him off |
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Post by pipandwill on Jun 12, 2012 20:19:33 GMT
It turns out Vampires are allergic to ponies, especially very fit ones like Thistle, Stripes and Fran- so they blew up. |
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Post by hollyxx on Jun 12, 2012 20:35:40 GMT
Then greedy Rory came back to eat the remains of the vampires, just to make sure they would never come back again...
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Post by pipandwill on Jun 12, 2012 20:37:21 GMT
Rory, Stripes, Fran and thistle then had a long rest shopping in birmingham town centre and even met The BullRing Bull:P
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Post by tabbyx on Jun 12, 2012 21:44:30 GMT
And Thistle gave Fran and Stripes some very good shopping advice, and is hoping to become the Gok Wan of the pony world |
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Post by snowflake on Jun 13, 2012 16:52:31 GMT
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Post by tulip8989 on Jun 13, 2012 17:09:43 GMT
they then visited cheshire and....
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Post by pipandwill on Jun 13, 2012 18:25:50 GMT
went to cheshire county show where they all qualified for hoys:D x
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Post by showponies28 on Jun 13, 2012 18:35:27 GMT
And won at hoys  |
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Post by pipandwill on Jun 13, 2012 18:51:29 GMT
They were now the best ponies in the country...
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Post by choppytrotty on Jun 13, 2012 20:02:28 GMT
But not yet! Whilst on their journey, a ghost had zombie had escaped from them, and was hiding in their Haynes...
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Post by choppytrotty on Jun 13, 2012 20:02:48 GMT
*haynets
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Post by welshiegirl on Jun 14, 2012 16:31:09 GMT
and he ate them!! |
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Post by choppytrotty on Jun 14, 2012 19:27:04 GMT
But that all managed to survive in the ghosts belly, so when the ghost needed a toilet break, hay were flushed down the loo and were washed into the sewers....
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Post by showponies28 on Jun 14, 2012 21:13:53 GMT
They finaly arrived in the sea after being sterilised and cleaned by the sewage works and were washed up on a desert island....
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Post by choppytrotty on Jun 16, 2012 13:58:16 GMT
Where they lived on pineapples and coconuts. They decided to go look for water deep in the forest. They set off, and half an hour later they found.....
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